Suggested revision of part of Maryann's first chapter into first person.
“If someone tells you writing is easy, he is either lying or I hate him.” —Farley Mowat
Thursday, February 25, 2016
Wednesday, February 24, 2016
Jordan
1
“You cannot be serious,” although the words were riddled with
accusations, “that's three days in a row,” his tone hinted more
of complete bewilderment.
“It's not my fault-” Tony quickly began a defensive appeal but
he was a little too hasty for the voice on the phones liking.
“Did I say it was?!” Although Tony had his ear pressed to the
cellphone and had wandered a few feet away from the rest of the
group, the voice came through as clearly as if he was standing next
to them all.
“Did I accuse you?” The tension that had already existed among
the click had now began to feel as if it was a tangible thing, a
product they could actually feel weighting down on them.
“Is there something you need to tell me?” As the question was
asked, the members not on the phone all tensed up, fearing the
repercussions and Tony, whom had been pacing about nervously a mere
second ago was now standing still, completely erect, like a deer
caught in the head lights and knowing his death is imminent.
“Well...” Tony's voice which is usually wrought with confidence
now found himself barely able to squeak out an audible reply, “No..
I just..I...” nor manufacture a sentence that didn't consist of a
stutter. However, before Tony was able to gain his composure and
offer up an accurate defence which in his mind sounded a lot like,
'Well, of course not. I didn't touch it nor did anyone in my
crew, from my understanding it is like this all through out the city;
because something to do with the global economy?' but instead he
managed to get no more than a few syllables out before the man on the
phone did the job for him and hung up.
Not to look like a weak leader whom was disrespected and did
nothing but shake with fear; and for his crews sake he simply
remained in his completely statue-esque pose and began to simply go,
“hmm-hmm,” “okay,” and, “i understand,”
in order to make it appear as if he was still in control. Of course
when he hung up the phone and took a minute too long to look at his
gang, it was painfully clear that they were aware that the boss had
long ago hung up on Tony. This knowledge being wide-spread among the
organization, specifically among the lower level employees was
dangerous.
“He said that,” but before his sentence was finished, the entire
group of his just moments ago true blue followers had turned there
backs on him and began to converse among themselves. Nothing of real
value was being discussed, they were just showing Tony that they had
lost all respect for him and now Tony was aware he had no crew and
due to the count being too under for the third day in a row, his life
was probably at risk. For the first time in a long time, since his
promotion to the captain, had Tony felt such a thing could be a real
risk.
“Well,” once the man on the phone hung up the phone he himself
had to answer to his boss, and his boss was one whom possessed very
little patience and less understanding in regards to excuses
specifically when such things are in regards to his money.
“His midday count is low.” Irony exists in all realms and niches
of the world, the criminal world being of no exception; because mere
minutes ago this voice on the phone had been domineering and
aggressive while speaking- intimidating Tony mere moments ago, but
now he himself had a voice that now felt like it belonged in the
mouth of another man.
“Is there a chance he will get to the goal by days end?” The
Boss, whose name very few knew his real name since he simply goes by
the name Boss, demanded of the nameless voice.
“It is highly unlikely, sir.” Giving such a man the bad news
often resulted in being temperamentally bad for the person delivering
the information, more than not being more severe of a punishment than
the news itself had been.
“Why do you just keep offering me reasons as to why my money is
being fucked with?” The boss demanded to know and as he asked it
was the first time his gaze had shifted from the putting club
clenched in his grip, swinging slow, smooth, practice strokes; but
there was no signs of a golf ball being present.
“Well, because, sir,” It was this mans turn to suddenly discover
the same cat whom held Tony's tongue had found a home inside of his
mouth, holding hard onto his tongue, “the count is so low that even
if he managed to sell out his package,” Somehow inside the
explanation of complete pure logic, he found his courage again, “then
he'd still need to flip another two keys before night fall.”
“Well, Mikey,” finally the voice that Tony and his peers knew by
simply, 'Nameless,' suddenly had a name, “Is it possible that Tony
is skimming off the top?” The boss's voice had lost the original
irritation it had been full of and simply became smooth, calm, almost
tempered. Mikey couldn't help but notice that the Boss gaze had once
again shifted down to the club that was mirroring the motion of a
metronome.
“I don't believe so,” Mikey had spoken before he had time to
think. A deadly error in many situations, and speaking to a dangerous
individual happens to be one of the more infamous of scenarios where
being one to think before talking is not just a benefit to have in
order to advance inside the business itself but also to ensure one is
able to find at the end of the day they are still breathing.
“But it is possible,” Mikey had done another error and he knew
it since soon as he switched gears to fast, The Boss man suddenly
stood fully erect, a fierce 6'5” and instead of placing his beloved
club into the hand of his cabby, the silent man in a butlers suit
whom was always found to be no further than a few feet from The Boss
himself, but simply let it drop loudly onto the wooden floor. “But
then again,” Mikey knew he was in trouble now, he had tripped
himself up and not even due to a guilty conscience but due to his
sudden indecisive behaviour. Granted the reason Mikey had decided to
deny Tony having any such involvement in stealing from the Boss
because in retrospect it had been Mikey himself whom had decided that
Tony was worth promoting and capable of managing his small crew, and
so if he was stealing- Mikey himself would be just as accountable.
But to throw a man under the bus just to save your own self is just
as heartless and dishonourable as snitching to the police is. Mikey,
being much too old to even be considered an O.G, he was just known by
his circle as being an O.
“It could be someone in his group,” Mikey knew that this too
was a dangerous line to walk; but like playing poker he was
considering the pot-committed theory and figured he has gone too far
to try and not bluff himself through now. “One of the new kids?”
The Boss had moved in few strides from the side of his desk and
across the vast rooms space to be standing within reaching distance
of Mikey.
“You-you,” Mikey was suddenly able to feel sweat begin to drip
down his entire body. “You know how they can be.” Mikey felt his
mouth go dry and wondered how much longer he could stand the stress
before he simply broke down and confessed to being the one
responsible for the money shortage even though he was innocent, just
to make this hellish torture of uncertainty end. Every time Mikey
converses with the Boss in a one on one environment, late at night
and on the Boss's own territory, Mikey found himself giving a few
Hail-Mary's before he was off the elevator and at his office door-
since the Boss was notoriously known for his mood swings.
“No,” as the Boss asked he moved a tad bit closer to Mikey.
Close enough that Mikey could smell the scent of peppermint on the
Boss's breath and the hint of after shave mixed in with it.
“Mikey, I don't know.” Suddenly the image of a cat playing with
a mouse came to the forefront of Mike's minds eye. “Why don't you
tell me,” Mikey suddenly had sympathy for all those people he had
heard of whom suffer from social anxiety and such; even though until
seconds ago he was convinced such people just didn't have a spine.
“Mikey. Tell me how these kids are now a days?” The Boss was
again still, and the man in the butler suit was also near Mikey.
Mikey had not even noticed this man sliver over to his known-spot:
feet behind the Boss, almost like he was not a man but his shadow.
“Well.” Mikey had began to try and explain how the youngish
today don't have respect for the elders or the game and see the money
and believe it's an easy score, similar to the stick up boys that hit
up the stash spots. Before Mikey had managed to spit this out, his
minds eye was suddenly dark. Nothing was seen anymore. Nothing was
felt. His fear was dissolved as to was every thought, feeling, or
memory he had ever accumulated in his life was now nothing. The last
thing he had seen was a bright light. Like lightening going off
inside his mind.
“Well,” as Mikey was suddenly beginning to relax a little almost
as if he was suddenly able to step out of the kitchen's heat by
simply passing the buck off onto another person. The Boss had a very
narrow view on things like trust or loyalty. Today, he was held a
narrow view on accepting any answer for why his funds are not
increasing at the exponential rate that he had long ago instituted
into becoming the nature of the beast he fed. The gluttony of man and
his lust for desires were the Boss's bread and butter. And thus if
one weak link manages to create a hiccup of any marginal kind in
this, the Boss must flex his might in order to put his soldiers back
in line. He refuses to ever starve, if even it would take a million
years of never earning another dollar before his cupboards would go
bare; but he was not going to let such a thing become the reason why
people start to refuse him what he deems to be his.
Mikey,
whom had been too caught up in trying to figure out the right way to
play this game he did not realize what was quite clearly written in
the air from the very moment he started to speak to the Boss, also
did not notice when the Boss gave a signal to the Man in the Butler
Suit. Then again even if Mikey had noticed the signal, the odds of
him being able to of dodged the initial assassination was so low that
even the most desperate of gamblers wouldn't put a dollar on even if
the return on such an investment had been a hundred billion to the
dollar. On top of which even if by some divine intervention Mikey had
dodged the initial attack the possibility of him walking out that
door in the way he had came was virtually impossible. In retrospect
many people would agree that it was a merciful death for him to be
shot in the back of the head like a common street rat rather than the
alternative method that the Boss resorts to. If Mikey was capable to
at all speak after the atrocious act, he himself would confess such
an ending was more preferred than waking up one day to discover
leering over his face was that of the very rarely believed to be
alive man known only by those that know he exists as simply,
“Causa-Miseriae.”
That man is known by many although those whom know full well he lives
prefer to believe he is just a myth since knowing he lives and is
actively practising his craft is just too much to live with even for
those whom are all too comfortable with getting hands bloody. This
was a much more pleasant way to die, even if that means your corpse
will never be found- it is much more desirable than knowing your last
few hours will be agonizing and your body shall be discovered but to
be buried at a funeral would require a few dozen coffins.
However, as Mikey's life was now no more it seems that he will
posses no opinion on the subject at the moment and will no longer,
sadly, possess an opinion upon anything else either, ever again. This
fact is one that though crossed ever briefly across the subconscious
mind of The Boss wasn't enough to make The Boss second guess his
decision to signal to The Butler to blindside Mikey with a gunshot in
the back of the head. The moment the bang had finished echoing
throughout the spacious business office, The Boss's large, long,
muscular legs had covered the floors length and was back at his desk
before the blood splattered brains of Mikey had even reached there
final destinations of becoming stains on The Boss's overly expensive
office's decor, picking up his phones receiver.
After a few seconds of the only sound breaking the silence being
that of Mikey's body collapsing to the floor and the soft, petite
sound of the blood dripping down off the ceiling on to the floor
beneath it similar to that of rain drops dripping off of leaves, the
emptiness was interrupted by The Boss's deep, booming voice speaking
into the phone without so much as the hint of a polite salute.
“Causa-Miseriae,”
as The Boss spoke the name he felt the hint of a shiver erupting
within his spine and that made him feel like a child again standing
naked and unprotected in front of his alcoholic and abusive father;
completely helpless, “I have a job for you,” and to experience
that sensation again after a long life of doing all he could to never
feel that way again, by re-living that sensation he was at that
moment more dangerous than any other moment in his existence.
If Mikey could say thank you then this would be the time that he
would offer his condolences for the easy death rather than stick
around to be the reciepent of The Boss's built up aggression and
akward embrassment. Although no words of this thought was expressed
by The Boss, The Butler however still felt his own body clench up
with rigormortis as if his own subconscious mind was preparing for
the worst case scenario- despite knowing The Boss for close to two
decades The Butler was aware that that did not excuse him from
becoming another cadavar that his Boss would one day answer to
Lucifer for. And knowing The Boss as The Butler does, as close to an
intimate comprehension for him as anyone ever has had the
disprivallage of being given the oppurtunity to reach such a
relationship with The Boss did nothing to ease The Butler's nerves
but to instead amplify such anxeity since The Butler is all too aware
that answering to the Lucifer did not at all bother The Boss. As far
as The Butler so far understood that upon death, The Boss has plans
to go and interagate both God and the Devil the same to inquire as to
why such a world that was created by them would let a man like
himself exist within it free of repremend other than the damage and
abuse he recieved as a child in the merciful care of his cruel
family.
“Yes.” The Boss spoke without a pause in between his words, “Of
course. The Amount is the same.” The Butler was pretending his best
to be invisible or at least make himself useful by opening the giant
dual oak doors that led out into the long carpeted hallway with
golden elevator doors and a marble waterfall within the middle of the
room and reached to the walls intercom system in order to page a
clean up crew to come dispose of Mikey.
“It is for my lt. Tony that works for me down on-” The Boss
paused in middle of a sentence and to be interupted was a giant
irriataion to The Boss and though Causa-Miseriae possessed an unholy
fear within every human that discoveres such a beast exists in
reality did not fase The Boss enough to not devistate such a persons
life due to his opinion of being disrespected, The Butler knew that
though he'd yearn to taste the smell of copper from Causa-Miseriae
blood being spilt onto The Boss's entire body since he to is no
stranger to the devistating torture of whom he precieves to be his
enemie; but since time has decided to escalate his trangressions of
humanity into a very profitable regieme, The Boss is rarely now seen
anywhere outside of his office.
The giant hand of The Boss was turning bone white as his hands
squeezed so hard on the receiver in his hand to aid in swallowing his
usual attitude of quick to anger when opposed so that he would not
offend the Causa-Miseriae too badly and end up having the best known
threat at his disposal become a dead line to his call.
“Yes,” The Boss found himself surprised since the voice on the
other end, a distorted computer generated voice simply interrupted
The Boss to indicate Tony's address, “That's the place.” Again
silence as The Boss's hand began to relax so to did the reciever's
chance of not being crumbled within his strength, “What ever it is
you have to do... Yes, find out why the count is constantly short.”
Then the converstation was done, the phone line was disconnected and
so to was The Boss's patience and from hearing the phone slam down
then be thrown across the room, The Butler was already glad he had
stepped out into the hallway to await the elevators delievery of a
member of the clean up crew. As the ding to the elevators arrival was
announced, The Butler himself stepped aside allowing the two men in
white to enter the hall and pull behind them a large table full of
various instruments and what one would presume was a modified high
powered vacuumm- as they passed the last one off the elevator looked
at The Butler from behind his painters mask and as his eyes squinted,
The Butler realized the man was smiling at him; and so The Butler
simply did a slight courtesy bow of his head to the man and waved a
goodbye since due to The Boss's current mood The Butler had high
predictions that the two men entering to clean up that of Mikey's
mess will then themselves become nothing more but a pile of evidence
to arrest The Boss and then themselves require another team of clean
up experts to remove their stains next. The Butler although often
removed from the every day annoyance of things like a conscience he
was however at this moment was touched a little by the pitiful hand
of sympathy for these two individuals that wouldn't even see their
demise coming.
Before The Butler decided to attoin his horrible accounts of
attrocious acts by telling those two young men to get back in the
elevator and run for the hills; but to due so The Butler knew very
well that doing so would be useless and pointless. Not only would
neither of these young two individuals believe the words of a raving
mad man dressed up in that of butler's tux because the pay for such a
thankless job is too great to give up, at least for those whom are
able to keep their stomachs down and mouths shut; but also because
then the Butler himself would become the one that The Boss releases
his unending lust for retrubution. Some individuals are able to
dispense and release their pent up stress in healthy ways, artistic
ways; but The Butler knew that to the Boss, things like art and
beauty often included things like torture and mutulation of inhumane
levels.
When
the early springs new days sun had already crept impatiently over the
horizons line until finally it found itself a spot to rest in until
it had to make its way lazily up into high noon for lunch wasn't the
only sign that a new day was upon the world. Some places rely upon
roosters for their post-dawn cry's and others use the annoying squak
of an alarm clock to indicate that the day is starting with or
without the inhabitants that populate the lands. However inside the
city of, Odi et Amo, the locals tended to know the time
of day without so much as a glance at a clock or even a look to the
sky fore the signs of the suns coming was seen all throughout the
streets. In fact to an outsider simply passing through would suddenly
have a sense of disillusion and bewilderment as they would surely
believe themselves to have entered some alternative reality where
monsters exist. Their would be spectres of former men dashing off
into their delapated catacombs, their place of refuge from the
tormenting agony of having to experience the warmth of the suns light
caressing their skin with kisses of death. Their make shift coffins
are constructed out of abandoned houses where inside of it is like a
vampires nest because their will be dozens of them sulking about
within, a covenent of desperate souls squeezed into a place where the
windows are either completely covered up in a sheeth of various
materials and cloths or boarded securely shut so nothing can
penetrate into their fortress of miserable solitude.
If observing such a sight
wasn't enough to convince a man of sound mind that he has in fact
stepped out of their comfortable realm of sanity and entered into
that of an insane nightmare. Their senses would tell them that they
seen real vampires but their mind will scream reason and explain that
what was just witnessed was not real but perhaps an epitome of
inspiration for such a novel creation. Then once they have shaken off
the delirum of sleep, they'd instantly start their departure much
quicker just to ensure their safety because if they are gone, then
rather those blood-suckers were really existing inside this
depressing city or not simply won't matter anymore. Only problem with
such logic is that the coin has a flip side to it s well. Once the
doors to those beings sancturies have all been loudly shut, the
echoing slam of them still sounding in the distance, the tourist
would suddenly discover another surreal horror they won't be able to
comprehend.
Over powering the then
fading sound of a hundred doors closing in unison came the moan of
something clearly in true agony and pain. The groaning cry of the
nighttime replacements were calling out to each other that it is time
to feed. To one unfamiliar with the rituals that are all to prevelent
in, Odi et Amo, these slow moving ghouls that shuffle their feet
across the pavement would now be seen all across the road and
sidewalk. Not just a few but an infurating amount of them. If the
city was a being made of flesh and skin then from an aerial view it
would look as if it had suddenly contracted a skin condition- looking
like some discoloured and infected rash which was forming at an
alarming rate would frighten even the most veteran of doctors; but
alas, the city is made of cement, pavement, concrete and metal. The
blemishes seen from above are just the festering scalps of uncleaned
bodies that had long ago taken it upon themselves to live, if you can
claim their existences as living, only for one thing: to feed the
monkey that pulled the levers to guide their movements.
As they trudged past a
civilian, that person would find it difficult not to gag on their
smell during the first few times they encounter such a wave of
degenerates moving past like a sea of liquid garbage waste. It is a
hard sight to see too fore their mouths which expell these cry's of
torture appear to simply be a dark hole that is traced not by lips
but rather two peeling scabs; and sadly, though they appear ready to
fall off at any moment, that is the part of their contenences that
appear to be in the best shape: medically speaking. The rest of their
dirt covered faces are riddled with open wounds, bubbling boils,
freshly picked holes, and other various infections all looked to long
be past any modern cure. The clothes that they all were wearing were
simply pieces of cotton that seemed to be so big on such petite,
frail creatons that even an XS on the largest of their kind would
look as if it was trying to consume the individual wearing it. Also
the material would look as if it had never known the inside of a
washing machine nor that one even existed; and what is worse is that
they all appear to be proud of their filth. It's as if their lack of
hygeine is a badge of honour that they sport with pride in a manner
of communication with one another. Their stains were evidence of
their tour of duty through the levels of Dante's inferno, a medal to
tell their commrades of their heroic tales of survival. To anyone
else they simply looked like a plague on the city. Evidence that hell
finally did get full and the corpses of the dead had finally been
reanimated in order to roam the globe in persuit of brains to digest.
To call them from their appearnce anything other than a zombie would
be alarming.
Although no one would
want to have a city be infested with either subclass of humans if one
was to be forced at gun point to decide which of the two they would
rather have be the populace in which they fnd inhabiting the majoity
populace of their home town, the general consensus would be without a
doubt of the nighttime addicts. At least those individuals albeit in
their own right an annoyingly dangerous group of people, are not only
gone at first light they rarely even bother with anyone outside of
their own kin.
The slow moving ghouls of
the mornings long standing ritual however would fling themselves at
anyone they passed that didn't bare the mark of their sins in order
to hopefully obtain another coin to accumulate to their already
pitifully low value and worth. The congested traffic for the morning
commute was already enough to drive the average Jon Doe crazy each
day, the added annoyance of having to evade the approaching creatures
with their unintelligable words and outstretched hands was an added
stress that even the most sinful of men didn't deserve a daily
assault by the empty shells of hollow beings. The walking mistakes,
the obvious failure to curve ones hubris of flesh and cheap
pleasures. Each day they immitate the medias portrayl of zombies more
and more. Just like the ones in the movies that seek and search
relentessly until finally they find something alive to ruthlessly
persue to no end, persue with no evidence of ever ceasing up until
their prey gives in, these immitations also persue their targets with
no remorse until they to finally give up or give in.
From afar it appears they
are aimlessly wandering about, proving a miracle each time they don't
simply collade into one another, they do have a goal in mind. Slowly
but surely they are all heaading out to their individual places to
gather up whatever currency they can savage through either begging,
harassing, boosting, robbing, stealing, break and enters,
middlemaning, selling copper-wire, scrapyard salvaging, trashbin
searching, and other embarassingly common methods of profit that they
will eagerly sink to until they hold in their grubby, black stained
hands at least ten dollars. Once at least that bare minimial is
reached, the appearant creatin suddenly has signs of their senses
returning to them- slightly, since they stop instantly what they're
doing and start towards where the dealers gather across the cities
stoops, corner stores, park benches and alley ways, like they are
being pulled to them by some unseen magnetic force.
To bare witness to such a
way of life one suddenly is grateful for the annoyance of the
everyday beeping alarm or nerve-racking craw of their neighbours
rooster to announce the days new start rather than having to exist in
a cess pool of depravity and sorrowful miscreants; and to learn to
read them themselves like hands on an invisible clock. The night is
full of raving pale specks of what could be a man coasting about if
not inside of a dimly light club that's full of pounding electronic
music, barely dressed women, loose morality, chemically engineered
drugs and paid sex; the dawn is marked by the arriving aroma of
unwashed bodies being released in swarms throughout the urban core;
noon is easy to spot since it is only then that the sound of laughter
is heard like music because of the children on break and the varying
collections of kids in their tiny clicques seperated by barely a few
city blocks all joking around within their circle while clocking the
dollars and fucking with the junkies; the evening is felt by the
weight of something in the air, the arrival of those few citizens
that still hold down a job heading home to wait out the soon-to-be
horriblely unsafe streets as well as monitor their own homes points
of entrance to fend of any intruders dumb enough to try and invade
these individuals privately and pridefully owned homes full of family
possessions and other syntemental valuables they are all too
willingly hopeful to kill for; the descendent of the sun back into
its bed is not only obviously present based on the sudden increase of
shadows and shady looking figures with hoods and bandans come out of
the wood works, the junkies are all making their final pleas for free
hits and the BOOM BOOM BOOM of
bass coming from within the trunk of SUVs simply fills up the air as
the reups take place and the money for the day is collected and paid
out; but in between the start of twilight and midnight comes the time
that no one needs to warn you is approaching because it is as evident
as it is built into every person that lives within the boarder of
Odi et Amo biological makeup.
That
is the time of day, everyday regardless of the season or temperature
that to be a stranger or tourist is often temperantelly bad for ones
own well-being. It is then that even the most kind faces and friendly
exchanges of conversation turn into suspicious glares and trumped up
threats. At this moment their exists too many variables for any one
person to ever wrap his head around trying to calculate a probability
of odds for anyone individuals chance of survival rather they be an
addict, actively involved in the drug trade, a joe-shmo, bus driver
or hobo, did not matter because during these few hours everybody had
the same odds of survival. None.
The
sounds of gun shots and screams have become so common placed that
most people find it odd if they do not hear such a symphony playing
out in the distance of the dark parks and alleys. Cars are no longer
obeying the speed limit and the SUVs espically do not stop for stop
signs or red lights rather not they are in a school zone or a police
officer is driving next to them. The odds of anyone being the
institgator or your reaper are multiplied to an exponenial amount
that even the most honest looking crossing guard will turn out to be
a mercileless bastard hell bent on taking another persons life and
wallet, rarely offering an ultimatum fore it's easier just to take
both; and when you are as starving, broke or addicted as these poor
souls are either forced to be or stuck on then it matters not at all
rather the life of their victim is spared or taken. They fret over
that less than they fret over a stain on their shoes.
Each
day is like this like life was a rerun of some old tv show that
nobody ever wanted to watch when it first aired lest of all the same
damn episode ten times a day in a language they cannot understand but
that's how it goes inside these desolute places. When things find
themselves nesting into a comfortable routine. Even when the actions
and decisions that the world has found itself repeating it matters
not at all for nature is indifferent and impartial, the only thing it
desires is the easiest path of resistence. Sadly not only did nature
find such a suitable situation inside of Odi et Amo but it all too
quickly became the everyday routine for its inhabitants as well. This
is the prime reason why so many unsathory individuals thrive in the
depths of this cities profitable black market and devious deeds done
without a sense of morality, compassion or Gods judgement flourishes
without ever fearing consequences of any kind other than death.
Day
in and day out it repeats. Sunrise to sunset it is the same with the
only variation is the change in whom is on top and whose at the
bottom; whose eating and whose starving; whose breathing and whose
choking on their blood; and thus this day is of no different: the
only change that is instantly noticable is for only a select few
people. The Boss's Lt Tony's East 32nd
crew that consists of five employees including Tony himself is one
man shy. Tony himself is never late lest of all absent for the entire
day and as far as any of his subordinates knew of him, Tony never
turned his phone off but today long after they had to turn away too
many customers and too much business and hours later did one of the
runners suddenly suggest that someone try calling Tony's cellphone
only to realize that for the first time in the history of Tony's
ownership of a mobile phone was it going directly to a voice mail.
Worse yet, they discovered was that the voice mail was already filled
up meaning they weren't the only ones trying to contact Tony.
All
of them too afraid to leave the corner due to the penalty of
diserting their post continued to stand around their stoop telling
junkies to beat it as if they were irritating the dealers when in
reality it was the dealers whom were irritated with their own absent
leader and lack of product to be pushing. The fact that Tony had been
a no show was at first a relieft fore the last few days he had been
driving them like slaves but when his phone was not on and the voice
mail full they all began to speak amongst themselves, offering up the
worst case scenario then quickly beating the level of brutality and
improbability they simply had a moment ago. They had discussed going
bye his house but none of them were even certain of where that was
nor could they call for a replacement since only Tony had the contact
information and numbers for the people higher up their food chain
than themselves; but still they refused to leave their spot in case
it was a test of some sorts. In fact it wasn't until noon had just
began to slip away did any news reach them of what to do or what was
happening. The only problem was that the information was delievered
in a method which if they could have chose how to recieve it would
have picked a different medium to find out that the message. Tony was
clearly never coming back and their store was shut down for good, but
unfortunately they were not given their pink slips in the most
traditional ways.
Their
severance package came in the shape of a fully automatic assault
rifle that was leaning out the front passernger side of a dark tanned
SUV with tinted windows and spinning rims. The back passenger side
was also pointing a combat shotgun that blasted until it was empty;
from the sunroof was the upper torso of a man in a black sweater,
hood pulled over his head, sunglasses on, a bandana over his mouth,
leather gloves on and in each hand an uzi with an extended clip was
helping to deliever the news that they were to be let go from their
positions in the East 32nd
Co. Starting immedietly.
Monday, February 22, 2016
Thursday, February 18, 2016
Wednesday, February 17, 2016
The Long and Short of It
WRITING ACTIVITY
Write a brief fiction piece according to this structure:
short F
long
short F
long
dialogue: short, short, long
short
short F
short F
long
short
long
dialogue: long, short, short, short, short
short
long
long
short F
short F
short F
long (thought)
F=fragment
25 sentences. You can begin only 8 with a noun referring to a person.
dialogue=can be internal monologue, or an interaction between two or more characters.
You can repeat this structure multiple times to create a longer piece.
VARIATION: Rewrite one of your pieces of writing or part of another writer's writing according to this structure. How does the variety of sentence-length affect the rhythm, pacing, voice, tone, etc. of the piece?
Monday, February 15, 2016
FEB 17th Class- Work to Worshop
Kassandra: Prologue, revised
Janet: Grandmother
Janice: Chapter Three
Ross: Vayne
Maryann Unscripted Journey
Jordan New Work
Tuesday, February 9, 2016
Thursday, February 4, 2016
Work to Workshop: Week 4 (February 10)
Wednesday, February 3, 2016
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